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by Riven   Oct 25, 2005


Where were you when I was crying?
Where were you when I was gone?
Where were you when I was dying?
why weren't you there to play our song?

You thought that I had forgot about you
You thought that I was through
You thought I was crazy
Crazy for loving you

I've given up on everything
Everyone I've ever loved
I'm seeing blackness,slowly slipping away
How could this happen to me?

Everything is lost is fates eyes
Fate ignores everyones cries
It doesn't care whose life it ruins
as long as it gets the soul it comes for
So don't try to run,don't try to hide behind the door
Cuz it will find you

Giving up was my mistake
I bought the ticket,my life is here to take
I'm sorry it ended this way
Don't make the same mistakes I made
And don't give up

Live your life to the fullest
And goodbye
*guns go off*
I'm such a mistake
*sirens can be heard in the distance

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  • 19 years ago

    by A Former Outcast

    Interesting.............using ambience in a poem. very ingenious, i haven't thought of that before. maybe i'll have to try it.