My Life Sucks

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Oct 25, 2005


Fires burn my soul until it is gone,
It's night to me, whether day or dawn.
Tears fall down my cheeks onto the cold ground,
Darkness takes over when no one's around.
Look in the mirror, and miss the old me,
Before cheerful, now depressed and edgy.
My cheeks are red, my eyes puffy from tears,
What has happened to me over the years?
I feel as if no one cares anymore,
People laugh and call me a s**t or wh**e,
But they do not even know me at all,
They want to see the mighty Erika fall.
They love watching me cry, and walk alone,
My sadness has become so dang well known,
Someday you'll see that you pushed me too far,
But the things that you said will leave a scar.
Someday you'll hear that I'm finally dead,
Cause I let what you said go to my head.
Bet you won't cry when I lay underground,
Bet you will just think,"Oh well, she's H**l bound".

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  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Great poem. I ve seen a TON of great works from ya, n i figured its only right to add you to my favourites so I can see when you got a new one coming out... 5/5

    Bryce Dressler

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Total story of my life. I can relate.

    Anywho, great poem! As always.

    Rave

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Awe this poem is an amazing painting of your emotions! It's sad but i know of so many people who feel the same, everyone does at one point or another! And thats what makes it perfect, everyone can relate! In a few places your flow was a bit edgy.... Remember in poetry you don't need to make full sentances on every line. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by joe w m

    Yes you have a talent 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow!! really amazing poem...very nicely written.

    u r simply great...take care and all the best

    the best part is the name u hv chosen...who cares!! stick on it in the +ive manner