by Wasted Fake Smiles Oct 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Fires burn my soul until it is gone, |
by Moose
Great poem. I ve seen a TON of great works from ya, n i figured its only right to add you to my favourites so I can see when you got a new one coming out... 5/5 |
by RetroRavey
Total story of my life. I can relate. |
by Brigitte
Awe this poem is an amazing painting of your emotions! It's sad but i know of so many people who feel the same, everyone does at one point or another! And thats what makes it perfect, everyone can relate! In a few places your flow was a bit edgy.... Remember in poetry you don't need to make full sentances on every line. :) |
by joe w m
Yes you have a talent 5/5 |
Wow!! really amazing poem...very nicely written. |