The last two lines are just outstanding. Well done - I'm semi-speechless.

Sorry for not commenting in awhile; Got exams in a few days so :(

*goes back to studying*

Love yah muchly
xx Kalah.

What an elegant piece. Really the imagery came at me very well. No problem feeling your message - very clear.

Love, Time, & Honour. They come with age, I suppose and hope. Who knows why burdens like love has to come out way...

In any case, fantastic piece. I really feel your anxiety in this one.

5/5

*not much for saying anythign today.