by The Bi Dude Oct 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The angel has died. His mother tries to catch the tears her fallen son has cried. He red blood spills in the pool of lies he cries. His mother is screaming why why why? The angels heart is broken, his wings clipped off. The angel has died. His mother tries to catch the tears her fallen son cries. |
by Sexi_Cassie
It was good and i liked it sweetie but you spelled words wrong. |
by Kristen
Aww that was short and sad! But I liked it a lot! lately I have ben writing a bit about angels, I just haven't posted them yet.... kinda broke my laptop lol! |
Yeh Not Bad...you Need To Fix The Spelling Though....But Other Then That A Good Poem... Please Read, Rate And Comment On My Poems :) Thanks |