The Angel

by The Bi Dude   Oct 25, 2005


The angel has died. His mother tries to catch the tears her fallen son has cried. He red blood spills in the pool of lies he cries. His mother is screaming why why why? The angels heart is broken, his wings clipped off. The angel has died. His mother tries to catch the tears her fallen son cries.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sexi_Cassie

    It was good and i liked it sweetie but you spelled words wrong.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Aww that was short and sad! But I liked it a lot! lately I have ben writing a bit about angels, I just haven't posted them yet.... kinda broke my laptop lol!
    andyways! 5/5!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Xx-BleedingSoul-xX

    Yeh Not Bad...you Need To Fix The Spelling Though....But Other Then That A Good Poem... Please Read, Rate And Comment On My Poems :) Thanks