Yeh Not Bad...you Need To Fix The Spelling Though....But Other Then That A Good Poem... Please Read, Rate And Comment On My Poems :) Thanks

Aww that was short and sad! But I liked it a lot! lately I have ben writing a bit about angels, I just haven't posted them yet.... kinda broke my laptop lol!
andyways! 5/5!!!!

It was good and i liked it sweetie but you spelled words wrong.