I know how you feel...it's always tough to forget the one that hurt us...I'm going through this myself...keep your heads up hun...

Drama... gah... great writing.. its very good. keep writing.

Hey, what a sweet poem..really good write..keep writing...keep up the good work!:)
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plz r/r/c mine too!

You can definitely feel there's some leftover feelings there!! But, yet you're trying to get past it and move on!! How you expressed it was beautiful!! Great job!!

Very cute but sad. Love hurts to say the least. SMile and think of the good not the bda.
~~Sweetie

Wow this poem is soo good, it is so true also its a sad reality, alot of relationships turn out like this and its hard for many girls to get out of them, i just hope your ok, your an amazing writer and i would hate loosing you to someone like him

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Loved it! so much emotion and truley amazing... i serioulsy love this poem becasue its so true and heartfelt. good job and keep it up!

sammie

I can relate to all of this, well done, it was sad, sorry to hear of this. But keep writing such amazing poems
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Another awesome poem, i can so relate. 5/5. wow you're really good. Simple yet effective.