Lovely, lovely, lovely. Absolutely enchanting, m'dear. This is -very- original, so I found, as well as modest and truly touching. Keep smiling my dear, and take very good care. You're an outstanding writer and a huge inspiration...Keep your head up. xxxxxx

Love always,
Sarah.x.

Nicely done!!!

It's freaking perfect! This is one of my favorites from you!
"For it's killing me slowly when we're so far apart,
so I'll die just to watch you from my cloud above the trees" I love that...I couldn't pick a favorite part as I love the whole damn poem!! But that part stuck out ... when you find love like this you're willing to sacrafice ANYTHING even life....that's when you know it's real...and it's an awesome feeling...though it can be painful as we can all see it is here...lovely piece Coonay!!