Questions(My Love)

Wow...that's really good...I love it...one of the best i've seen from you so far...one of my fav too...keep it going...

I thought that poem was good keep up the good work

Will I ever be loved?
Will the moon ever shine on me?
Will a star ever twinkle in my eye?
Will the ocean ever hit up against my beach?
Will my knowledge ever help me find my way home?

Love so pure and innocent
The mysteries of beyond incite
Beautiful inquisitive eyes of mine
Sweet smelling sands lie around me
The brains of old and new concepts

I love you more then you could ever comprehend
The light of space graces your delicate features
That sweet little star calls out to my heart
You see the sunshine hidden inside
And you understanding will never escape me

Im very picky about stanza:P thanyou for the comment i might need to take u up on that in the near future...

Jenn