Comments : Questions(My Love)

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Will I ever be loved?
    Will the moon ever shine on me?
    Will a star ever twinkle in my eye?
    Will the ocean ever hit up against my beach?
    Will my knowledge ever help me find my way home?

    Love so pure and innocent
    The mysteries of beyond incite
    Beautiful inquisitive eyes of mine
    Sweet smelling sands lie around me
    The brains of old and new concepts

    I love you more then you could ever comprehend
    The light of space graces your delicate features
    That sweet little star calls out to my heart
    You see the sunshine hidden inside
    And you understanding will never escape me

    Im very picky about stanza:P thanyou for the comment i might need to take u up on that in the near future...

    Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by Ella

    I thought that poem was good keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Wow...that's really good...I love it...one of the best i've seen from you so far...one of my fav too...keep it going...