Yet another great poem, keep 'em comming!

I just read this again and it means so much to me that I had to write another comment. Can't believe that no one else has told you how good it is! I love the way you kept the end so simple, it really shows the helplessness and despondancy, it is so final. I also like the way you are questioning yourself, I hope you find the answer and that you find you can hold on.
Great write. 5/5
*VioletRaven*