by Kurt Oct 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Betrayed by a friend |
by Jenni Marie
This is really good... |
by heather
OMG this is soo good. i wish i could write as good as you |
by Darien
Yeah, I've been there. It's a very crappy situation to be in, especially when you think this person is your blood brother. I thought I could have trusted my friend, and he lets out one of my deepest secrets. Definitely not cool. Anyways another great write. Keep up the good work. |
by ash
Wow, this is great!It has a lot of emotion, and I think it's good!You really put a lot of time and work into this, and it shows. |
by HJ
Great poem, and in someways very true. Wonderful flow. I always find that writing from the heart is the hardest things to do and pull off, but you tackled it beautifully. |