This is a really great poem. the rhyming is great and it has alot of depth. keep inspired. p.s i think your work is brilliant and you are one of my fave poets of all time. hugs nd kisses jess xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I think everyone in their life will go through this.. I know I have plenty of times. The person will try to be your friend again when he/she is done with your love, but dont go back.. resent her or him for all he or she has done. I could never do that to a friend, i am a loyal person. Kinda like a dog hehe.

-Love always,
Jennifer.

Great poem, and in someways very true. Wonderful flow. I always find that writing from the heart is the hardest things to do and pull off, but you tackled it beautifully.

Thank you so much for your comments. When you get chance check out my latests poems "Rivers of the Heart"and "Love and War" I would be interested in your opinion.

I look forward to reading more from you.

Regards
Hayley

Wow, this is great!It has a lot of emotion, and I think it's good!You really put a lot of time and work into this, and it shows.

Yeah, I've been there. It's a very crappy situation to be in, especially when you think this person is your blood brother. I thought I could have trusted my friend, and he lets out one of my deepest secrets. Definitely not cool. Anyways another great write. Keep up the good work.

OMG this is soo good. i wish i could write as good as you

This is really good...
Powerfully written, strong imagery that creates vivid pictures and you can feel the anger radiating from the written words.
Beautiful work.