by LadyPearl Oct 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Your soft sapphire eyes |
I love it, nice description, and original words. Keep writing. 5/5 |
Wow that was gr8..good vocabulary...good rhythm..all around gr8 poem. 5/5 4 u! |
by Miss Megan
Great poem!..im not sure what to say, but it was wonderful...u can tell u put ur heart into it..hope all works out...*rates 5* |
by NannO
Omg.. that was such an amazing piece.. gr8 write!! ur rhyming was amazing, and u had a gr8 choice of words.. aww, it was reli sad, but i still loved it.. i loved ur last two lines the most.. thumbs up! u got my 5 |
Beautiful !! |