SuIcDe GiRl

by hm   Oct 26, 2005


She turns her back on the world she thinks she is alone on this earth!

she thinks of the people she noz and think what her life is worth
all she wants is sum1 2 help her take away her pain
she hides her feelings and will keep San and her anger retain!

she lives in a dark place nobody noz
she will die lonely because all the happiness she finds goes!

she looks all strong but her emotions weak inside
so weak she will die of SUICIDE!

she hates when people can think they can use her and lie!
so she will say goodbye and slit her throat and die!

she hopes 2 all that treated her like shit will feel guilt!
because they have destroyed her dreams she has built!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a nice one!!! i can relate somehow to this poem

  • 19 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. SOO GOOD.. and so real.. ive been there before NARYLEY POEM!! keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    When I read this I felt like you knew what I was thinking, this is a great (yet slightly disturbing) talent to possess, be proud of it. I'm sure others know how this feels too, which makes it a very successful piece of poetry.

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky Karen

    Great poem, yoou sound like you have lots of good ideas. keep writing! x

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    U r sooo mean! i am so offended! i cant believe u sed 'if we have 2' hahaha thats sooo low! i feel heart broken! lol ' the person i loves stabs at my heart everyday' hahahha its not a song! im offended by u josie and until u apologise and say 2 me that im the only girl u could ever get under the bed with wink wink lmfao!! i will be upset and waiting 4 u 2 say that

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