Kool poem. i love the way you used everyday objects like cards, cars and precious stones to explain the idea of how this person is special to you. nice ideas you haev there. you're poems are rather unique also, great work.
5/5 in all aspects.

Wow,i really really like your poems.i cant get enuf.im just about done reading every single one.I cant even discribe how i feel.Hmm wow.is all i can say.Wow...

Aww that's sooo sweet lol nice work keep it up! thanks for commenting on ma poems:)

Good poem, i especially liked the last stanza. there was alot of emotion in this poem...it sounds like experience.

Brad

P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem...i hope you voted.

P.P.S. if you like story tellers, you should read some of mark spencers work 'redneck wedding', 'redneck christmas' and 'the wandering angel'.
My favorite is 'the choice' its one of his first ones.

Very good metaphors and this woman is a lucky girl!!