Ur poem is nice and also perfect,u deserve every nice thing in this world my luv..then i read the empire of darkness..its great&calm..its my opinion as its sad and i like that...God with you ya 7abibi we ye7'alyk leya.....excellent man(ya 3'amy :-p)

HER EYES WERE DIAMONDS SHADED WITH FEAR
that line really made the poem just that much more meaningful to me. i go such a strong mental image. very well written, another fabulous poem

Amazing poem, it was written very well. It has great imagery and a rhyme scheme. It had a lot of emotion in it. You did a super job once again Ramy.