What love should be

by Liz   Oct 26, 2005


A girl asked her guy if he thought she was pretty. He said....
NO. She asked him is hewould want to be with her forever...and he said No. So then she asked him if she were to leve would he cry, and once again he replied with a NO. She had heard enoug. with tears in her eyes she turned to leave, but he grabbed her arm and said....You\'re not pretty your Beautiful. I dont WANT to be with ou forever, I NEED to be with you forever!!! And I wouldnt cry if you walked away...I\'d die.....

Please rate this its not mine but it makes me cry almost every time I read it lol Dancechick16

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg thats so cute omg at first i was crying when he said no and then i was the end and i was liek shit thats so adorable now uve got the guys over u lol given u dere emails lol
    xoxroxyoxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg thats so cute omg at first i was crying when he said no and then i was the end and i was liek shit thats so adorable now uve got the guys over u lol given u dere emails lol
    xoxroxyoxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SilverStrider

    I've read that before... It's a very nice poem... it refers to nice guys... yet they always end up finishing last...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    LOL... i already commented! =P I have read this before and like you, i cried my eyes out!! =(

  • 19 years ago

    by girly†

    Oh how
    hottttt

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