Lost in Tragic Thoughts

Woah... so short but so full of anger and passion. great work.

*jackie*

Holly, when did you start reading my mind? This reminds me of things I am going through at this very moment..very nice write. Tim

Its a good poem and i think i'd have to say that stanza two was my favorite. i'm not sure about the ending stanza though, it just seems a bit lost. sorry.

Brad

P.S. feel free to trash one of my poems, lol, (no one votes for them anyway, lol)

Love this poem, the thrid stanza I feel is a bit messy though. But overall, I really like the feel to this piece, well done!