Love this poem, the thrid stanza I feel is a bit messy though. But overall, I really like the feel to this piece, well done!

Its a good poem and i think i'd have to say that stanza two was my favorite. i'm not sure about the ending stanza though, it just seems a bit lost. sorry.

Brad

P.S. feel free to trash one of my poems, lol, (no one votes for them anyway, lol)

Holly, when did you start reading my mind? This reminds me of things I am going through at this very moment..very nice write. Tim

Woah... so short but so full of anger and passion. great work.

*jackie*