You had me

by Jacqui Armstrong   Oct 26, 2005


You wanted to be a part of me
you wanted to hold me tight
you wanted everyone to see
you wanted what was right

you had my heart and my soul
you had me in your arms
you had my life you had control
you had me under your charms

you lost my heart and my soul
you lost me from your grip
you lost every part of your control
you lost and let me slip

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was brill. well done and keep it up
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  • 18 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    Eek! *glomps* I love this one! >.< I'm a sucker for love poems. It's really awesome.

    -Carissa-

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow. I really like this poem. I can really relate to it. That's probably why I like it so much. Great job sweetie!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job keep up the amazing work. 5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. that was so gud.. ur rhyme and flow wer great.. and ur topic was amazing.. i lyk ur choice of words, and i adore ur last 4 lines.. wer absolutely wonderful.. i hope it wasn true..
    take care
    Nannoush

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