by +Fouillis+
Hey that was amazing.... i dont really no what to say! ur an amazing writer! i loved it... that was heaps good, dont ever stop writing... maybe if you could comment on some of mine, there really crappy but yeh? ta, xo |
by stephanie
Wow girl!! very strong poem! i felt that way b4 when my man left me and we was together for 5 years! i just didnt know how he could throw 5 years away!! well im over it now! that poem braught it back for a minute!! very touthing!! keep it up!! |
OMG! that is the BEST poem iv read in ages! And i can honestly say that i can relate! Excellent job!! Keep it ^ |
by Miss Megan
Beatiful poem...sad but it happens...u put ur heart into it and its obvious...nice use of words....keep writing it'll get you far!..*rates 5* |
by Adinda
A depressed but very good poem! |
by seans baby
Aww that’s so sad I would say not to let NO guy put you through that but Im the same way if my baby would have don’t that to me (and im a cutter) I would not be here im sorry you have to go through that just keep your head up boo you got the rest of your life you fall in love I know it seems imposable but you’ll make it through I know you don’t know me but ive been there and if it weren’t for that happing I would have never found William remember what don’t kill you will only make you stronger *Nicole M* |
by stephyG
Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy.. |
Gurl i like that and i also voted for your quote about how you dont get vote but anyways i like this its deep 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
Wow! This was amazing. Truly excellent write. |
by Brittany
This is very well written. Keep it up |
Oh my gosh!! That's really good!! Lol. It's true though, and I'm sure I'm not the only one that feels that way!! Keep going. 5/5. |
by sobe
Omg ur a deep writer n das good |
Awwww this was a great poem, really sad but i loved the flow and could feel what you were going through |