Wow another great poem 5/5 xxxx

Hmm, perfection. Well for everyone who thinks they are perfect. You are.
Yes, you heard me right. I've gone against your poem, why? Because everyone is perfect in their own way. Like your poem describes, everyone has their own flaws, but that's what makes them unique. They are the perfect them, flaws and all. That is why, everyone is perfect.

Good poem though..
A perfect score, because it is a perfect poem. How is it perfect? well, because it was written the way YOU wanted it to be, and everyone has their own way of writting, and this is your way, and it is perfectly yours. (that probably doesn't make sense, but I can explain it later)

ok, I pretty much wrote a lot, so I'm done :)

Really liked dis hun u got your feelings across really well xxxx

Wow.. this is gr8.. so full of hurt, and deceiving words of description.. very nice... flowed pretty well, tho ther was no rhyme.. important topic.. i lyk how u repeated the word Perfect, and also ur choice of title.. gr8 job
Keep it up
Nannoush

Its true it soo happens..and your poem is soo sad. your a great poet so keep writing!
xx
thanx for your comment

Hey, thanks for your lovely comments. This poem is so great! I love the way you used irony in it. The message is clear and there are many there too.
Keep it up
xxx

I like you poem it is very different :)
and i think your right no one is perfect but alot of people think they are. i really like ur poem well done and god bless

No one is perfect lol and you made that quite clear..Good job, but why are your poems so...depressing? Is that just your style? Dont get me wrong, i think theyre really good, but so sad...great job!!

I'm also going against your poem. Evryone is perfect in their own way because we know we have flaws and can even be proud to show them off to get better. But this poem was sad yet hit hard about real life issues.

I agree wit Darien!! Excellent job!! 5/5!!

I agree with Darien!! Excellent job!! 5/5!!

I love this poem..the message is great, i hate it when people think they are perfect...you can mask your feelings making you look like this happy self conceded person who supposivly has no problems...but thats impossible...no one is perfect and we all have our flaws...great job! 5/5

You certainly have a way with keeping your reader on their toes! A very suspenseful wirte and i enjoyed the contrast you used in your stanzas! It made it very very unique!

I agree with a couple comments up there... every one is perfect in their own way. I think you might be directing this towards people who think they are soo great... people who are full of themselves? i dont know, maybe im wrong.. but i really liked this poem... its definately the best one by you so far. "My perfect soul is now at peace. Just a perfect body strewn neatly across her bed. Followed by the last drop of blood. Slowly dripping to the floor." That was my favorite line in your poem.. and in my veiw the strongest. 5/5 -jen-

I think i already commented on this one but i didnt do a very good job so here is what i think!!

"My perfect soul is now at peace. Just a perfect body strewn neatly across her bed. Followed by the last drop of blood. Slowly dripping to the floor."

THIS IS MY FAVORITE LINE!! it was amazing!! the flow was good and the topic i really liked!! But i think that everyone is perfect just in their own way!!! 5/5!!

You seem to use alot of description in your poems, and most of the time, its a good thing, but some times, its nice to keep it simple, leave things to the imagination. otherwise, your poems seem heavy and hard to read...remember, keeping your peom short and or simple, can get the point across alot better then a poem that is long and heavily sophisticated. 4/5

So true. :)

Love MKKA!