5/5 Really good poem, I can truly ralate to it ^_^ nice job and keep it up |
by +Fouillis+
Hey that was heaps good! maybe if you could comment on some of mine some time? thanks... yeh that was really good, i really enjoyed reading it. very heartfelt... xo |
by Daniel J
The tenor of the poem was broken at times. A common theme - love, or lack of it tends to be - but also clichéd lines, such as refering to love as a game to be won or lost. |
by Adinda
Well said! |
by Ruthie
Aw katie I loved it! I can see that poetry is more than just a hobby for you... keep writing cause I can't wait to see more:D thanks 4 the lovely comment. *hugs* |
by Dmitri
Brilliant! Very well put. Every line is selected perfectly and the message is quite clear... and yes, love is like a game, everyone's a winner. Keep up the great writing! |
by karley
Hey girlie great poem i LOVE IT!! lol it has a great meaning lol love ya MUAH!! KaRleY |
by Andi
Wow....made me cry! its beautifully wonderful....it reminded me of my ex....great rhyme scheme and i loved the format.....def keep up the good work! id appreciate it if u could comment on my poems! |
by Brittany
Very good. I really like how you wrote this! |
I love it! especially the beginning :) 5/5 xxx |
by xXsesorderXx
Nice poem i like it ^_^ |
by Bre Monique
I like this one! its good! |
by Kellie
That's a very cute poem, sad but cute. |