When I think of you hurting
I feel it deep down inside
I become broken and alone
Always comparing me to you

I start to cry the suppressed tears
My fake smile melting away
My happiness displaced as I write
I want to die, make it go away!

I scream and shout, I write it out
Never to be heard by you
My heartfelt words written
My pain begins to ease away

Till next time, I’m happier this way

Maybe i dunno what your lookin for hun but i tired

I don't think it suck...I think it's nice...both is different in their own way...so I think you should not delete either of them...cause they are both good...

It doesn't suck joc ilove you too