Sometimes

Aww....i can say this is rlly true...5/5

Wow its a powerful poem :)

was great and loved the flow:D

keep up the hard work

Jacs
xxx

Wow, this poem asks for comments. Life is hard, difficult and often seems impossible. Giving up is the easist option for all of us; it takes strength and immense courage to be able to live. Your rhyming fit into place well and kept a beautiful flow, you did a good job of not making the ryhming seemed forces, that takes a lot of talent. I can relate to this poem on many levels, because I am a person who has difficulty dealing with emotional pain, and has a high tolerance for physical pain . . . a bad combination. keep you head up baby, you only have one life to live, once it's gone you will loose all your chances to makes something of it. Dying doesn't solve anything, doesn't bring any good, I found that out the hard way and I will be forever tainted by my mistakes of the past (see my poem Suicide through someone else's eyes, for more detail or Sorry is Never enough.) You write well, I look forward to reading more of your work.

-Tainted Mikochan

Again, nice poem... Great flow, great ideas expressed, just overall great.. Keep it up, your an amazing writer...

sammie

Great poem i loved it!!!