That was such a sweet dedication.. ur rhyme was gud, too.. and the flow wasnt so bad.. i think u shud write wat ur heart tells u to.. that way, it wud be a lot better :D (ive tried :P) ur lucky to hv friends who will be ther 4 u wenever u need em.. keep ur chin up and stay smiling
take care
Nannoush

I think you could have done better, the wordings were a little bit off, seems too forced.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

You are a great friend...that's all I have to say.

Thi is great you shouldn't write based on what other people want you to write but nevermind that cause i like to see happy poems from people every now and then this is very good your flow was good the rhyming was very good the only thing i didnt realllly get was the very last line

From years to Days.

it just sounds silly to put days after years it sounds like your friendship went from years to just days and thats not a good thing and i know it was only written that way to rhyme with always but always is a simple word so many words rhyme with it that would sound nice

5/5 good job

Hey i love the poem i hope you get on the chat some thme

Nice poem. ^_^ it was like... kinda off, but still awesome. keh keh bai bai.---

I love this... very creative and it reminds me of my best friend

Hey! Wow this is a great poem! I can totally relate to it! NICE JOB!

This is a good poem and i really loved it...keep up the great work and keep ur great poems comin...5/5 mami

WOW....you're definitely on my favs list!!! 5/5!

Michelle