I no how u feel about dis my dad drunk alot and he died :(( i hope ur dad gets betta....i like dis poem and i feel sorri fo u but can u comment on some of my poems sometime thkz!!!~*~

Very good. The stanza's are short and to the point. It could use a bit more diverse vocabulary though.

That's really good. I love it. I can relate to that in some way. Like, you want yous dad "back." Like you're tired of him being this certain way, and you just want the "real" him. It's really difficult to live with. You seem so nice. I feel like I can really trust you. Thanks for all the comments. I'd love to keep in touch with you. I sent you a private message. Take care of yourself!

Love always.

I like it alot thank u so much for the comments they r really helpful thank u so much ur 1 of my fav definatly keep it up!!

;'-(hillary)-';

It sucks having an alcoholic parent for you its your dad and me my mom! i used to live with her and she only made me a worse person, i had no one to care for me or look after me and my brothers, so i did it all. i had to become an adult at a VERY young age and its not fun at all. hope your dad gets better and you can also talk to me any time you want me email is craziepinkblondie@yahoo.com k
XOXOXOXO

~Ronni

Hey, this poem was great, the way it was worded was awsome as it got straight to the point.Sorry to hear you're father is an alcoholic.
xx Riffy xx