This is so nice...I can't find words to explain how I feel about this poem...this is amazing...and I can relate to it...most of us can...you describe the feeling very well...it's very unique...I've seen this kind of poem...I wrote this kind of poem before...but this is the best I've seen so far...really flawless...

Aw this is so sad. you've written it so beautifully, its a feeling i can relate to, and im sure others will to. its great, keep it up and take care xxxxxxxx

Hey that was a great poem! I didnt know you were such a good poet..well, keep on writing

I really like this poem. It is very well writen. I enjoyed reading it well keep up the good work and always keep it real!

It's not a bad attempt I guess, there's just no real depth to the poem. Suppose that could be an attraction to someone, but I prefer things to be a bit more developed.
You've focussed more on the rhyme to the detriment of the content. Try not to make things rhyme unless it just comes naturally.
-Laura.x.

I like this. very well worded. keep it up!! -k-