Lauren, My Lauren

by ntv650   Oct 26, 2005


Just wanted to say quite simply,
Rather casually and unceremoniously.
With the most nonchalant of tones,
And in the most cavalier fashion;

That I cannot hold you forever,
Or miss you when youre with me.
Save you from crying your tears,
And protect you from what will come.

Neither can I promise you prosperity,
Persuade the stars to shine for you.
Nor give you my out-most affection,
Continue to adore you the way I do.

But so long as I hold you still,
And miss you when youre with me.
I can assure I will endeavour to do,-
-All those promises just made to you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lauraballz

    Wow... This is yet another really touching poem. As said by this other guy, it's not obvious what you're getting at in the first few lines of the poem, but the meaning becomes more clear towards the end and is all tied up very nicely! :)

    Keep it up xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by Drew

    The extravagant words in the beggining could trip some people up. Poetry is about being able to touch base with other people. Most people wouldn't be able to understand the words you have included at the beggining. But in the end its a good point of what your trying to make.