I love it! its really deep and in a way not, well anyway keep up the good work. your a great poet!

~liz~

I really think it is good i hope your father 4gave u good luk 2 u

Thats so nice i wish i was able to see my dad to he died i miss a dearly and not to sound like a baby bout i cry almost every day but yea thats a nice poem

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