Nikki ...
The more of your poems I read the more I fall in love with them ... You are extremly talented and have a beautiful and unique style ...
The flow in this poem was spectacular and the emotion behind each stanza incredible ....

That Comment Made Me Scream In Real Life! I Was So Happy *Hugs* I'm Glad You Liked It....Lately I've Been Dissapointed In My Poetry :) I Needed To Hear That *Kisses* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Not that's my style. Your first caught my attention immediately. Nice job, great imagery.

Not is supposed to be Now on my previous comment

Perfect flow and tempo....However, the best part was that it wad from the heart. The language created a picture of anguish and it worked well. Excellent poem. I love it.

I'll Never Wash My Lips
I'll Remove Your Perfect Scent
The Essence Of Togetherness
When Kisses Leap To Vent

i really love this verse, i can get were ur coming from nice work , great rhymign as usual xox rc

Oh, wow! This is awesome! It conveys so much emotion. Also the flow is spectacular! I love the depth in this, very well written! Keep it up~Holly

Beautiful Nikki, what can i say? i luv the "liquified promises" great flow.
Tokens Of Togetherness
Reach Eternity's New Breech
When I Fell In Love
I Fell In Way Too Deep
this is my favorite part. probably because i can relate. keep it up Nikki~ take care XXXXX
JL

You are extremly talented and have a beautiful and unique style...You are blessed with so much talent...This was beautifully written.... great job....

Love Ann

You really captured what happens when we leave reality blinded by "love" and then are suddenly slapped in the face with the hard truth...

Nikki, Such a beautiful and sad write with so much emotion.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Great poem I love it!

Do you go on girland?
my username is hazelxeyes mail me if you do. don't message me on here doesn't work lol.
i loved this poem. i read it on girland lol.

Lol! *Lesbian Lovers 4 Life!* Love You Kristy! :) xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Omg, extremely beautiful!!!! i dunno what to say, loved it!!! so true, so deep, so full of emotion aghh! i dunno what to say other than AWSOME and..omg lol... ^^

-pili-

I love it i cryed when i read it 5/5

This is a beatiful poem. one of the best I've read sence i started going to this site. I'm very impressed, thank you

Truly brilliant writing. I understand the feeling behind the poem. Great job well written, good use of rhymes and best of all amazing word choice.

Wow really good poem u got real talent!!!xx

Wow that was awesome nikki!! so beautifully writen and full of emotion. great poem
luv courtie x0x0