That pretty good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg this was like really really good. I loved the whole thing. 5/5

Hey this is really good!!! its beautifully written, u have a gr8 talent!!!!! i loved it 5/5 check out mine if u have any time!!!
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Wow your poem was amazing ... i loved it so much

Its really bad

I liked it. It was kind of both sidish though. You were talking about loving them, and hating them. but i understand. love turns to hate, when your heart is broken, mine was just broken for the first "real" time.

Beautiful poem..."The Perfect Fairytale
a Book Without The Page"

love those lines they really stuck out to me! this poem has so much emotions in it and it flowed great. it's a wonderful write. i hope everything is going ok though. i'm not sure how much you relate to your writings, but i hope it's all going good.

~Jacklyn

This poem was without a doubt breath-taking. It seems like it took a while to write and like you put a lot of heart into it! 5/5 Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work. And thank you very much for your comments. They mean a lot to me!

I really love this poem..

I have a question for you, I'm a lead singer for a band and I wanted your permission to use this poem as a song. You'd get full credit, of course..

Give me a reply - vladis2004@yahoo.com

thanks, hun. good work :]