What leads to the road ahead?

Overall I'm really sorry but I wasn't too keen, I felt that compared to some of your toehr poems that this one did not flow as well and that on oocasion a bit more attention should have been paid to the rhythm. However saying that, I absolutely loved;
Days came
Days went;
I thought that the simplicity of that phrase really encapsulated the fact that you can't control time (this was a theme that I read in the poem, which you may not have intended) and they also kept the poem moving really well. I don't know why but that really moved me!
much love x

The last line ran a bit long and you could fix up that no answer stanza. But other than that it was sweet, cute, and to the point. I really did like it. The title was what caught my attention and your poem kept that attention til the last line. So be proud because I do have a short attention span lol.

I liked it but i wasnt my favorite one from you.. great job though

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Hey joe =) what's up buddy ol' pal? in the chatroom you 'discretely' asked people to read your poems...so i decided that i would becuase i don't really have anything else to do lol...

i like this poem a lot....i've done the same thing, lay in bed for hours listening to music, and wondering what life will bring and what lies ahead....and all that junk....it's some confusing stuff, huh? lol..

well, keep up the good work....i've never really read any of your poems before, but i like this one....=) *hugs* i'll talk to you later....

-brittnay-

Hey! great poem it's so true! i think about something for so long and the answers always in front of me or there is no answer
luvs ya Melissa