Wonderfully heartfelt....a lesson to all...never give up care, custody and control of your.......uh.....er....self respect and dignity (I bet you thought I was going make a testicular referrence didn't you) in a relationship. Excellent poem.

I feel the emotion and the pain really came through really great poem keep it up hope to read some more

Beautiful poem, it's so sad but it's also true, it's so hard to say no to someone you love.
The first stanza is great.
Keep writing! 5/5

Good poem, but I fear at some part you actually forced the rhyme.

You got of tracks a few times, but this poem is still pretty amazing.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

That was a really great poem, i think that the rhyming was good and so was the rhythm. it seems really heartfelt.

Okay a little confusing, maybe im stupid but i couldn't tell if this was about a boyfriend or a best friend...but anways imma definatly put you on my favorites your a great writer im actually pretty jealous lol, this one didn't as perfect as the last one but it's still an amazing poem 5/5

I can't think on my own,
Isn't that what you did say?
Everyday you said you loved me,
And you lied every damn day!
^ my fav part!! good job! this is exactly how i have felt, a lot of ur poems r!! ur now one of my favs!!

Awww so sad. im sry if this is tru. wow..sumday i kno ull b famous 4 ur work. gr8 gr8 gr8 job! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Sometimes, we love people so much, but they never love us in return. We learn from these kind of relationships, unfortunately, it happens for a reason. If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you.

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Thanks again for participating in the friendship poetry contest. I enjoyed reading your poetry. Keep up the great work!

Michelle

Dayum! Good write AJ! The emotion was raw and real. I loved the poem. Love ya!