Invisible

by ShadowDancer   Oct 27, 2005


I can walk through a crowded room
i can lay my emotions out bare
I can pass thought a mob of fanatics
And no one will remember I was there

I'm a girl that no one can recall
You see me, and then you forget
It's the same as being invisible
And it's something I just don't get

It's not like I'm hideously ugly
Or so boring you fall asleep when I speak
It's just that no one can see me
as each person walks past i grow weak

One day I will look in a mirror
And there will be no one there
Only the room behind me
A desk, a table, an empty chair

with this noose I take matters into my own hands
Invisible no more will I be
And so when I am hanging here swinging
Maybe someone will finally see me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I've already commented on this poem
    lol
    anyway, ill do it again because it was just THAT good
    love
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow, your poems just suddenly got a whole load better. This was another masterpiece - incredibly well written. So sad!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    I cant say much more than WOW!

    Keep it up

    Darkest Wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I really wonder...y hv i been so late to get hold of this poem...this is an awesome one dear...the pain has just been xpressed they way it should be...amazing work

    though i m too far..if u ever feel like just letting somethings out from ur heart....try me.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Amazing... you did a wonderful job writing this and its almost perfect... there were a few things that didnt fit but it was still great! keep it up!

    sammie

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