by Daniel J Oct 27, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
What if I'm too scared? |
by Ariana
Definately different I found this quite original and even though it seems to be in part unrelated, I can see how you bring it all back together. Nice job. |
by Gracie Jo
Very nice. :] |
by Z
Damn right! Rhyme isn't always necessary. Poetry is about flow and getting your point across, sometimes rhyme isn't needed at all. Good poem! |