by Torn Oct 27, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
The Past... |
Hun, I like this one hun. It is true with a bit of optomism at the end tying it all together. Don't worry, your old poems really aren't bad hun I was enjoying the read. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Yeah, everyone has low times the creep up every now and then so I guess I will have to grit my teeth and hope it will be over soon. That poem is a bit strong, and I have thought better about posting it, so I think I'll thank it off, though your vote was noted. Thanks love. Nice to hear from you. Hope you are doing well. |
by LostSoul
Omg, this is sooo good. I need you teach me how to write.. ahh I'm tired of being embarrased and not knowing what to say. Good day. |
by Pilar
Great poem! |
by lilyumi
Nice written i have to say :) |
by Rich
Wow - Your poems are so deep I just can't read them in all one sitting. I almost hate to call this a poem because it's so much more than that. It's wonderfully created. |