Great message and great emotion bejind it and the similis were amazing but i couldnt read it right, i know u wrote it in a specific format so ppl read it right but i couldnt. i still thought it was an amazing poem though. 5/5

Omfg bee...that absolutely rocked!
love you,
gerra

Love it bee!

Hey britt, i loved this when u wrote it during....global...haha...ur so good at making the reader feel like ur description, i love all the similes w/ the water....
does this by any chance have to do with...well...me? and....u? becoming sorta like me? if it is, im srry....just in general....for being that way...
anyways, great job, u know i love ur work always,
xoxo~*rach