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HEy. i reallllllly reallly love this one. obviously im not going to get the exact meaning out of it as to why you felt this way, because everyone gets a different perspective when they read poetry and tahts why its so great. it can have so many different meanings.i guess its just when u read it, how u apply it to your life and what has happened. i know with me when i read this, i think of a boy, who really hurt me emotionally and physically, and whenever something happens if i hear his words, i still can feel the pain. but im sure thats not what yours is about. and poetry clubs are sort of for getting your poetry noticed a bit more, to have people to talk to about them that will answer, and different stuff like that. its weird tho, because not many groups do that. i know for sure i havent gotten a comment or vote from every single person in out poetry club. it would take them each one minute yet none of them do. so i also, find myself question what these clubs are all about.

Nicely done! Very clever. Great write! Keep writing... 5/5

Wow...that is so good...I really love it...

I know exactly what you mean this poem means alot to me cause i take so much crap from guys and this makes me see...keep writing your poems r G-R-E-A-T!!