Hi guys,

This poem has taken me a little while to write as it is very personal to me. I'm sure how it will be interperted...
I hope you enjoy it and respect my abigious style.

Kisses
Hayley

Sorry meant to say "Im NOT sure how it will be interpreted"

Kisses

Hi again Hayley, thought i would send a small comment ypour way, another good poem, takes the reader into your mind and then into your heart, sounds just like a summer love to me, one that is remembered with tenderness, and wonderment as to how it could ever end, but the passion while it lingered on was so great, makes a person think it was something needed to get you to a higher plane of love replacing the passion that was there and developing it into a full blown love, only to have it too somehow come to an end, could it have been just an encroachment on your own loneliness or could it have been someone that was attached to another but for some reason was detached for the summer months, alas I fear we shall never know the answer to that, all in all a darn good poem. as always your friend Harry

I love the way the poem mingles a story with passions.Then leads to natural metaphors and imagery with a flow that I envy. You did it again. You have not lost your touch 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

0hh t0uching lines. very well written. g0od use 0f w0rds. beautifully written keep it up!

A small comment Harry!! ha!ha! Thank you so much for you kind words and encouragment. I love the way you have read and digested everyword. Not knowing the answer you say, perphaps in my next poem he!he!

Thanks to everyone for taking the time, means a lot to me. And Michael thank you for your kind words, you envy my flow...I am very flattered as you are one of my favourite writers, so thank you.

Kisses to you all
Hayley xx

I think possibly this is your most interesting poem yet, you know I prefer these to your dark ones.

HJ...Another sensational write....as always....Love your work....

Love Ann

In one word?

BREATHTAKING

It was beaustiful and it means so much it seems..i'm sorry if that happened to you. I loved this you are a very good poet keep up the good work.

Lily

This was so beautiful i really liked it!!!!

I enjoyed reading that.

Thank you so much Adel that is so sweet of you. I am currently working on a new piece. But anyone whom knows me will tell you that I always do take a while. Always have been like that, dont know why.

I promise within the next couple of days I will be entering my latest poem.

Kisses
Hayley

I would rather have one poem that
takes a while then ten I can write in
a day...I believe this poem was worth
the wait...

Shelby

Great poem. Amazingly familiar feeling behind the poem. Always willing to lend and ear and a shoulder =-D. Anyway great poem and a job well done.