Dieing Day

by Drew   Oct 27, 2005


He looks at the pills on the floor
The ending the open door
To make all the pain go away
Stop the yelling from everyday
Just a couple could stop his breathing
Take his life out of meaning
A couple pills could stop the screaming
Then it starts to seeming
That all his life was made for nothing
The tears and breathes keeps huffing
Then before he swallows as he could
He thought of all the people that would
Cry until the fell apart
Then die because of a broken heart
So he got up and walked away
To live another day
This person I am talking about may sound crazy it seems
But, that person is me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Nice job on this one... i like ur writing...keep it up...5/5

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 19 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    I like it its peryd good may i suggest leaving out the hey in the last line but its up to you
    srry to be selfish could u check out some o my poems

    ;'(hillary)-';

  • 19 years ago

    by Drew

    Um, yea its true. I consider this to be one if not my best poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wow drew, you're very good at expressing yourself. you did a
    great job on this one. I liked
    the way you ended it.
    Is it really true?
    take care,
    marjan

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