Its nice

I liked this one too but as for advice in my opinion i think we should get to know who you are writing this for you say he and you but you never tell us who he or you is which is kinda frustrating cause i dont know if your talking about family or a boyfriend or something like that and i think that like takes away a lot from this poem because it's a good poem but we don't really know what it's actually about its very very vauge 4/5