My Final Choice

by Lilium   Oct 27, 2005


As I sit here reminiscing
Of bad times passed
I have to make a choice
I sit here with a knife
In my hand deciding
I try to remember the good times,
But there are none all I have
Is bad memories
My parents never loved or cared for Me, I had no friends to
Comfort me, I was abused
I make the choice
I put the cold steel to my wrist
Just then I hear the door open Downstairs
I take one last look at my suicide
Note
The pic of my family is right next To it
I made a swift movement across My wrist
The blood slowly begins to poor Out of my veins
As I lay back dying, I start to fell Sorry for myself, but it's to late Now
I know I am going to Hell for my Choice
I begin to feel weak
I close my eyes and let the Darkness wash over me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Crossiance

    Anyway.. I don't really like this poem. Not enough raw emotion. This seems really forced and it doesn't really seem like a poem. It sounds like you're trying to just tell people how bad you think you have it. Don't misunderstand me, I'm not saying you're lying or that you've never felt this way.. I'm just saying that you are seeming to try to hard. I'll read your other poems as well.. More emotion next time please, and don't try so hard.