Black tears

by Bug1219   Oct 27, 2005


These cold and wet
sad and suffering
tears of blackness
stream down my face
in rage and hate
these tears that
i shed are caused
by all of the pain
they give me
the blackest of
black tears stream
down my face
no one will wipe them
from my eyes. no one
will sheild me from
these awful tears
of the blackness that
pulls me down
the sadest of sad
deepest of deep
long black hole
please someone
come and sheild me
from these tears of darkness
and hate. so lonely
and depressed they
are. these black tears.

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  • 15 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Beautifully written. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    5/5 for meaning and for it being so unique

  • 18 years ago

    by Kiara

    I like how you expressed yourself with this one

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    U repeated things so much it didnt have as big effect as u wanted...it was good but i can tell u can do better. i feel like ur holding back on this one...u need to broaden ur vocab a bit too! thx for ur comment,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    U repeated things so much it didnt have as big effect as u wanted...it was good but i can tell u can do better. i feel like ur holding back on this one...u need to broaden ur vocab a bit too! thx for ur comment,
    love ya lots,
    sore

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