by lost•in•lies Oct 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The cuts on his wrist |
by VioletRaven
Sorry, I meant "The" when I said "These"! Stupid me! |
by VioletRaven
5/5! I like the way you've repeated "These cuts on his wrist" at the start of every stanza, it keeps driving the point home. Luv all your poems. Keep writing. |
by Chantelle
You already know what i think... it was awesome!! How do you come up with such good poems! Luv Chantelle |
Dats so beautifull:):):) i hearts it!!! can u comment on sum my peoms plz*gives shy look* |