The Cuts

by lost•in•lies   Oct 28, 2005


The cuts on his wrist
hide his broken heart
The cuts on his wrist
make it impossible to restart

The cuts on his wrist
show all the pain he goes though
The cuts on his wrist
say "what'd i do to you?"

The cuts on his wrist
are his sign of pain
The cuts on his wrist
show his life no longer remains

The cuts on his wrist
show that he was hurt
The cuts on his wrist
show he was treated like dirt

The cuts on his wrist
show his way to cry
The cuts on his wrist
were what made him die

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  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Sorry, I meant "The" when I said "These"! Stupid me!

  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    5/5! I like the way you've repeated "These cuts on his wrist" at the start of every stanza, it keeps driving the point home. Luv all your poems. Keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chantelle

    You already know what i think... it was awesome!! How do you come up with such good poems! Luv Chantelle

  • 19 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Dats so beautifull:):):) i hearts it!!! can u comment on sum my peoms plz*gives shy look*

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