Comments : Screams left unheard

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Well...I guess it's sad, but I like the hope...just keep the hope! Good work!

    Rose
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel J

    A sad poem indeed... :-(

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Though this poem didn't rhymed, I still find it a very creative write.

    "but until that day
    i will always scream hope
    someday, my voice will be heard"

    This stanza is my favourite for some odd reason.

    Nice write and excellent topic.

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    (")-(") Arrivederci!