Again just check for the funky symbols, we make a wonderful team:)

I like this version much better thn the original, sorry 2 say. i would put my fave bit here, but i think it wud b a reeeeeally long comment if i put the whole poem here! i really liked this version, it was powerful and pacey but neva once lost my interest.

good work. keep goin.

xX

Wow...cool...it seems to me you always write two poem with different title but they too bring different meaning...that's nice...