Ouch...sounds very deep.
You could perhaps work on the flow (I'm always getting that.)

Good Writing!
beth

Wow! I love this one... it is my fav...You show great emotiion in your poetry...that is a hard thing to do..only true poets can! Great Job...check out my fetured and new poems...I think u'd ike them

Xoxo
Kayla

I can relate with that but about my nan she ment the world 2 me our bdays were the same day and there was always something between us x x x great poem its 1 of your best u really are a great poetX X XsexcbishX X X

Great job
i love it
its great
5/5 no doubt