Comments : Can't Lose You

  • 19 years ago

    by k i k i

    Hey people, this is a really special poem for my awesome friend 0riel who is a beautiful friend of mine :) She's such a loving and caring person and she can always cheer me up! It's going to be really sad when she leaves and it won't be the same:( I'm going to miss her so much!!!

    Friends Forever 0riel xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mie

    Thats really beautiful.. i can relate to it and it almost made me cry.. you're very good at writing..

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    Hey KiKi, great stuff one this piece its like happy but then sad, it cool as lol. Look at some of my poems and tell me what you think. Take care, Love Nat mwa

  • 18 years ago

    by samantha

    Hey kiki,
    sammy here :) this is a beautiful poem darls and I have read many of your other ones and I do think you are good at writing poems! now keep your work up dude and remember your brilliant!

    luv sammy