by Renee
Awww..this was amazing. I could imagine a man on the operating table, and being able to read his mind and all he's thinking about is his woman, nothing else. Not even death, which he is so close to. And he risks his health just to see her and tell her he loves her and to hear her voice. You did an amazing job with the imagery, as you can tell, lol. Didn't mean to summarize it like that, I just liked it a lot :-) Great job on this, keep up the good work |
by Karla Gordon
Sweet poem..I really enjoyed reading it. |
by Laura
Bill as usual this is a great type fo love story. The lady you love must be one special person to inspire you like this. |
by Ann Stareyes
Bill...you truly went through a lot during this time and still your heart was with Stephanie...If that don't tell the story nothing ever will. Your love for her is just unbelieveable...She's a very lucky lady....God Blessed you and pulled you through and gave you back the love of your life....Beautiful... |
Bill, |
by Kristen
This is an absolutely beautiful poem, it is apparent that you must have had great inspiration. great job! |
Wonderful Bill, great job, bravo!!! |
Thats good |
by Ladymustang
This is a very deep poem emotional very good I liked it. |
by Tammy
Bill that was wonderful! It's amazing what it takes sometimes to bring two people together. God truly blessed you both. |